Pitching Lessons

Eco-Agro Enterprise – Sydwell Sihlangu

Case Study
What you heard in the pitch

WHAT DID WE HEAR IN THE PITCH?

Authority

Sydwell starts off his pitch by referencing the South African Mushroom Farmers’ Association (SAMFA) statistic that there are only 17 mushroom producers in 25 sites across South Africa. He does well by referencing an industry authority. By highlighting that there are only 17 mushroom producers in SA, he is implying that there is space for more producers in the market. A savvy investor would be asking the question: If the production of mushrooms is so easy, with a relatively low barrier to entry, why are there so few? What is it about the industry that is keeping the numbers so low and how would Sydwell overcome these barriers to entry or barriers to profitability?

Describes what he does

Sydwell describes what Eco-Agro Enterprise does by saying, “We produce and bring nutritional mushrooms closer to our local market.” This is a very high-level description and, if this were the only thing that Eco-Agro does, it would suffice as a general description. We understand that the business grows and distributes mushrooms (and brings nutritional mushrooms closer to the local market). But later in the pitch, we hear that this is not all they do.

Generally speaking, when an entrepreneur pitches to an investor, and summarises (contextualises) what the business does, it is usually followed by the how. Although this is not a rule in pitching, it is the preferred sequence to make the pitch more understandable. Sydwell did not follow this sequence.

Separates himself from others (USP)

Sydwell does very well by differentiating his business from other “smallholder” producers as he provides structural mushroom technology. But, this might be confusing to the investor because in his earlier description of his business, he said he is a mushroom producer. So, to whom is he providing the structural mushroom technology? And what is this technology?

“Structural mushroom technology”

Although the use of the phrase “structural mushroom technology” is a good summary for the device that he later covers in the pitch, it does leave the investor asking themselves what structural mushroom technology is? And to whom is he providing it if he is producing mushrooms himself? While the investor is wondering about this, they might become distracted and miss out on what he says next. Before jumping to the problems being solved, it may have been more effective to describe the technology and how it creates the USP.

Pain and problem being solved

Sydwell does very well by articulating that there is a pain and a problem in the market. The pain and problem he identifies is the accessibility of nutritional mushrooms, malnutrition, food and protein insecurities. Pitches that clearly articulate the pain or problem and how the business solves it are more compelling. However, it’s important to get across that the way the problem is being solved is more effective or efficient than how the competitors are solving it.

Current business model

Sydwell tries to describe his business model to the investors (judges) but does so in a confusing way. He lists the revenue sources which sound quite disparate and broad. Investors prefer to invest in businesses with a narrower focus and a more explicit USP. By listing all of these different revenue sources, Sydwell is making the classic entrepreneurial mistake of having as many fishing rods in the sea (market) as possible instead of using a speargun to target specific, valuable types of fish (a specific market).

Timing

Sydwell runs out of time which indicates his planning and preparation for the pitch were not appropriate. Many investors will see this as a proxy for how an entrepreneur will run their business. In other words, some of the judges might infer from his lack of time keeping that Sydwell would be a poor investment choice as he may also be an ineffective planner in his own business. Although this may not be true, it may still convey a poor impression.

Judges clarifying questions and responses

JUDGES CLARIFYING QUESTIONS & RESPONSES

How money will be used

Nedbank judge Monique Chinnah asks Sydwell about how he will use the money and gets a non-specific response. It’s clear that Monique is confused by the general nature of his response and is seeking a more specific answer. Investors like specifics and clarity. Sydwell’s answer is neither specific nor clear. His answer had the potential to completely scupper his pitch. Always be prepared for the question: How are you going to use our investment? The more specific and clearer you are, the better the impression you will give investors.

What do you do?

The Engen Petroleum judge Zishaan Abbass wants more clarity on what Sydwell actually does. Sydwell’s lack of specificity about what he is actually selling during his pitch made this question an inevitability. This puts Sydwell on the backfoot. Given the short time available to get his business pitch across, Sydwell should have spent more time tightening the way he described his business model. If experienced investors struggle to understand the business model they are likely to think that the entrepreneur is probably also confusing the market and not communicating the value proposition succinctly and understandably.

Position in value chain

Zishaan goes on to probe how Sydwell generates revenue. Once again, Sydwell explains that he has multiple sources of revenue. Zishaan stops him and asks him where he sits in the value chain. The most likely reason Zishaan is asking this question is because, like many experienced investors, he knows that startup businesses that spread themselves across multiple points in the value chain are more likely to fail as they have multiple learning curves to overcome, multiple competitors to beat and multiple markets to convince.

Innovation

Sydwell reveals that he has an innovation – the African Hut Mushroom Dome. Investors like to invest in companies with defendable innovations. Sydwell mentions that the name is trademarked but it is not clear on whether there is a patent on the design of the dome. He explains that Eco-Agri produces mushrooms more effectively using the dome technology and then goes on to explain that he is also providing this technology to other small-scale farmers. At first glance, it seems like Eco-Agri is providing its competitors with the same competitive advantage. Only when Raizcorp judge Allon Raiz asks further questions does it become clear that Eco-Agri consolidates the offtake from other farmers and then sells the mushrooms to retailers. Sydwell is effectively supporting his suppliers (the other farmers) to more cost effectively produce mushrooms thus keeping the price lower than if they were not using his technology. He should have explained this far more clearly in the actual pitch.

Judges clarifying questions and responses

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Florence Duval

Florence Duval is a seasoned strategist with over 25 years of experience leading sustainability, stakeholder engagement and social impact initiatives across public and private sectors. 

As CEO and founder of IN TOUCH, she guides cross-sectoral teams to deliver high-impact advisory solutions that strengthen institutions, enable public-private partnerships and secure both the legal and social licence to operate. Her expertise spans compliance, community development, issue management and sponsorship development – always anchored in sustainable development principles. 

A former mining executive and committed social activist, Florence is known for her ability to build meaningful partnerships, navigate complex regulatory environments and drive transformative impact through purpose-driven leadership

Monique Chinnah

Monique is a curious, serial questioner who wants to take the mystique out of business and finance to make it practical and relevant to entrepreneurs. ‘Why?’, ‘Why not?’ and ‘How can we help, for real?' are her favourite questions.

She is the Senior Manager of Segment Design and Development in Retail Relationship Banking at Nedbank, and she is responsible for ensuring that small businesses are fully supported through Banking and Beyond® solutions and most particularly as the product owner of the SimplyBiz® platform. Monique believes that keeping business strategy simple, real and practically implementable is fundamental to success. She also believes in the power of fun. If you don’t like what you’re doing, don’t do it!

Monique draws on her own entrepreneurial journeys and extensive management roles in various industries to ensure that solutions are conceptualised and delivered with small-business owners’ needs in mind.

She believes in life-long learning and being a sponge through immersions in over 300 000 businesses, various tertiary and educational programmes, and she is a YouTube and social-media hustler. In 2012 she was awarded a scholarship through Goldman Sachs UK to attend the 10 000 Women entrepreneurial programme through the Gordon Institute of Business Science, and she has been recognised with several Top Achiever Awards in Nedbank.

Allon Raiz

Allon Raiz is regarded both locally and globally as a pioneer and maverick in the business-incubation industry. He is the founder and CEO of Raizcorp which, according to The Economist, is the only genuine incubator in Africa and which currently supports over 500 businesses.

A two-times PhD dropout, Allon is the best-selling author of three entrepreneurial books. He hosted the first national radio show on entrepreneurship in South Africa in 2004; wrote and hosted the first South African prime-time entrepreneurship reality television show; and created and published an entrepreneurial cartoon strip. Allon is currently hosting his 15th season of the popular The Big Small Business Show on Business Day TV.

Allon is a co-founder of the Entrepreneurs’ Organisation South Africa and Rural Roots, and is on the advisory and judging boards of numerous local and international NGOs and entrepreneurial awards. His passion for and focus on the development of entrepreneurs attracted the attention of the World Economic Forum (WEF) which, in 2008, recognised Allon as a Young Global Leader.

As an accomplished international speaker, Allon was invited to speak at the 2011 WEF Annual Meeting held in Davos, Switzerland. In 2011, he became a member of the WEF’s Global Agenda Council on Fostering Entrepreneurship, making him one of 15 recognised global experts in the field. More recently, he became a member of the WEF’s Global Future Council.

In 2013, Allon received the Entrepreneur of the Year Award at the Oliver Transformation and Empowerment Awards. The following year, he became the country winner, regional winner and continental winner of the Titan Award for Building Nations.

Between 2014 and 2016, Allon guest lectured at Oxford University where he was recognised as the Oxford University Saïd Business School’s Entrepreneur-in-Residence.

In 2015, Allon received an invitation from the White House, on behalf of President Barack Obama, to speak at the Global Entrepreneurship Summit held in Kenya.

Nonkqubela Maliza

Nonkqubela Maliza is the director of Corporate and Government Affairs at Volkswagen Group Africa. She has held the position since 2006 and also chairs the VW Community Trust and VWSA BEE Initiatives Trust. 

Prior to this, Nonkqubela was a senior executive at Metallon Corporation, a pan-African mining and financial services company with operations in South Africa and Zimbabwe. She also served as a chief director at the Department of Trade and Industry and has strong experience in the financial services sector. 

Nonkqubela holds an MBA from the University of Cape Town, a BA Honours in Economics from Rhodes University and a BA in Psychology and Economics from Rhodes University.